The personal crit from Alison and Stephanie went OK but I missed the class feedback. Alison liked my wavy lines. Relief. Stephanie, not so much but, Alison's the design person, right? (No offense, Stephanie.) I changed some things up. New image for the postcard. Yay, I have my diversity back. Moved the black eye girl to the poster, since she's the more impactful image. Changed the copy quite a bit. Went with a story telling approach. Kept my curvy lines and treated all images the same with the curves.
Enough talking (I should be working anyway). Here are the new pieces.By the way, I've decided I don't like Blogger's interface for images. It's nice you can put the images here for free and not host them elsewhere, but the html is horrendously ugly.
1 comment:
I like them. I really like your headlines and the colors you used. And this round is definitely more consistent with the wave pattern.
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