Stephanie sent her comments to me for the profile draft. This assignment was more difficult for me and, again, the tension about the assignment ended up on the page. More specifically, I need focus.
There is much I want to say about the subject. The small group crit helped me realize I was unfocused. I thought I tightened it up but it's still ...meh.
Time to edit again. Might be time for me to wipe the slate clean. Identify my story and start from there, as opposed to starting from the draft.
A funny thing happened on my way to putting my copy into my design. My copy had subjeadings. I took them out in the design. In her comments about my (original) copy, Stephanie said 'nice job on the subheadings.' Ooops. : )
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